@Brandon, It sounds awesome. I have only experienced working in the software industry (SD, Web, mobile, eCommerce). Hardware industry what you mentioned sounds exciting!
Here is some feedback on what I have about the experience of the latest position.
- “Engaged with customers to define user stories”
I would be a little more focused on achievements, rather than processes. What project it was? What did you change exactly?
Right now it is hard to say what exactly your impact was.
I would say something like:
“Defined requirements for the integration self-driving technology project (or whatever it was) by interviewing customers and collecting quantitative feedback”
Documentation is a great part. I would paraphrase it to “Authored documentation included test cases which cover the 100% of functionality”. Probably it is not the best wording, by I would like to see some achievement here because I can only assume how much work has been done there.
How did you measure productivity? What was before you start leading the process? If this number is accurate I would put in on the first place “Increased team productivity by 38% by…”
I like the point about the roadmap. I would put in on the first place. Be ready to answer the question of how have you done this.
English is not my first language, but I hope you got my idea. Tell me if you have any comments about my feedback. Also, it will be great if you will keep posting about your transition journey!